As said in the last post, i tried scribbling about "Lovveeee " and this is all i could come up with...
"All is going so wrong,
evrerything seeming so blue,
I know that's the moment,
I desperately need you...
Evrything around me is just so erratic,
I dnt seem to get a clue,
Mind wants to stop thinking,
And i just need you....
The world appears to ve turn a back on me,
Each feeling is illegible and new,
I am all surrounded by unknown,
And i hurriedly search for you....
With nowhere to go,
And nothing else to do,
The only truth is,
I want you and only you............!!!!!!
"All is going so wrong,
evrerything seeming so blue,
I know that's the moment,
I desperately need you...
Evrything around me is just so erratic,
I dnt seem to get a clue,
Mind wants to stop thinking,
And i just need you....
The world appears to ve turn a back on me,
Each feeling is illegible and new,
I am all surrounded by unknown,
And i hurriedly search for you....
With nowhere to go,
And nothing else to do,
The only truth is,
I want you and only you............!!!!!!
Hmm... true for all of us going through this phase of life. Well written ... :)
ReplyDeleteYup... i knew u ll for sure relate to it !!!
ReplyDeletewell written .. but tune tension de di ab to..
ReplyDeletebeta its great u can sale this poem and get money... dont waste such talent .. smbody can use and earn by it..
He he he.. ye to jyada ho gaya !!! :) but nyways thnks fr the huge compliment!!!
ReplyDeleteSundar... :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete<3
thnks...
ReplyDeleteNice lines revealing true feelings......
ReplyDeleteVery rhyming poetry.. nice one
ReplyDeleteHey thnks for dropping by Rahul !!! hope to receive more feedbacks from you in future...
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